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Locked Away

My heart wanders repeatedly.
It’s why I try to keep it on a leash.

Everytime I let it go,
It comes back wounded and broken.

When I question it,
I get no reply.
Constantly I try to find
The reason for its pain
But all I get is the blank echo
Of something that has died.

This time, as I let it go,
I followed behind it
To find the cause
Of it’s repeated suffering.

First, it stopped
at the garden of love,
Full of lusty fruits and lush blossoms.
It seemed to have found its end,
And delighted in its find,
While I rejoiced secretly.

But then thirst invaded its throat
And it wandered past
The boundaries of sanity.
I came upon it
Drinking of the waters
Of betrayal.

And it wept
As it drank,
And I wept alongside.

Now it stays
Locked away
In a gilded cage,
Safe from the eyes of passers by
Safe from beguilement
Of any sort.
©2008 =Calyptra
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My first piece of poetry in two months now? This was written for my friend :iconnokchaaier:. I know what she's going through, and I sympathise completely, because sometimes (like now for instance) I feel very abused and shredded up. I'm not exactly looking for critique on this piece, but comments are always welcome.
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*NokchaAier:iconNokchaAier: Mar 22, 2008, 1:31:26 PM
hey...Thank you sooooooo muccccccchhh.....You made my day!!! and u've written every bit of me!!!

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~squanpie-lit:iconsquanpie-lit: Mar 22, 2008, 2:35:36 PM
I like it. I am a bit slow when it comes to poetry - I like things for the image they give, is they show an theme in an interesting way, and I think this one does. Of course, don't listen to me about anything to do with technical merit of a poem, because I still don't understand how they work, but I like reading the clever/funny/imaginative ones. Ramble and out.

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~Plornt:iconPlornt: Mar 22, 2008, 6:23:47 PM
That's a really touching piece. <3
=Calyptra:iconCalyptra: Mar 23, 2008, 2:29:29 AM
Thank you dear <3

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~Plornt:iconPlornt: Mar 23, 2008, 2:32:21 AM
You're welcome. :)
~Mistress-Inu:iconMistress-Inu: Mar 23, 2008, 12:50:47 PM
Awww... I do hope everything turns alright for her (and you, if the same sort of issue is still troubling you). *has been there before*

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@limetastic:iconlimetastic: Mar 23, 2008, 2:13:55 PM
:hug: It's really beautiful. <3

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*Inherithus:iconInherithus: Mar 24, 2008, 10:22:15 AM Mood: Wow!
That's fantastic. :clap:

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=Calyptra:iconCalyptra: Mar 24, 2008, 12:26:05 PM
awwww, thank you love! and I'm very obliged for the fav! :heart:

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"Evil is just the absence of Good,
Just as Silence only exists when there is no Sound"

Please visit my :gallery: [link]

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